literature

Patience

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Literature Text

What we want most

Gives us pleasure

When it comes, even if it

Takes longer than we expected.

Whoever the person is

To the end we wait no matter

How long the journey.

Frolicking into victory's embrace is

Where we want to

Work towards because the result is

Why we set out in the

First place
Update!

I like writing poems like this. I've gone through the polished it by taking out the extra words and phrases that weren't working for me in my first version and given it a title. Thank you to all that suggested (dA and FB).

Hint: There is a pattern. Look at the first words of every line!
For me, every first word of every second line adds more depth to the poem. Give-Take, To-Fro, Work-First :D
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SexxyStrawberry's avatar
Very nice poem very beautiful