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Literature Text
What we want most
Gives us pleasure
When it comes, even if it
Takes longer than we expected.
Whoever the person is
To the end we wait no matter
How long the journey.
Frolicking into victory's embrace is
Where we want to
Work towards because the result is
Why we set out in the
First place
Gives us pleasure
When it comes, even if it
Takes longer than we expected.
Whoever the person is
To the end we wait no matter
How long the journey.
Frolicking into victory's embrace is
Where we want to
Work towards because the result is
Why we set out in the
First place
Update!
I like writing poems like this. I've gone through the polished it by taking out the extra words and phrases that weren't working for me in my first version and given it a title. Thank you to all that suggested (dA and FB).
Hint: There is a pattern. Look at the first words of every line!
For me, every first word of every second line adds more depth to the poem. Give-Take, To-Fro, Work-First
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Very nice poem very beautiful